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understanding narcissism by ~mySeity:iconmySeity:



I cannot be
my own lover
don't think
I haven't tried--

sitting on a window,
waiting for someone to pull me off
the world grew hot with color and still
I sat there, summering,
willing myself not to fall

you might understand
if you could have seen me
on the ground a year earlier, ripped open
like an envelope carrying bad news

but fingers will
never tell you the full story

my heart is a helicopter with nowhere
to land
though there is
so much land
©2008 ~mySeity
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I am coming so far yet falling
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~InnocenceDivine:iconInnocenceDivine: Mar 13, 2008, 8:33:49 AM
Blew me away. Absolutely. Amazing.
~sunshinegypsy:iconsunshinegypsy: Mar 13, 2008, 10:29:14 AM
oh, the end.

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In my dream, the angel shrugged & said, If we fail this time, it will be a failure of imagination & then she placed the world gently in the palm of my hand.

Brian Andreas
*jonzoiplu:iconjonzoiplu: Mar 14, 2008, 8:02:11 AM
first stanza is something lovely that you might find in a song (:

p.s. i don't think you've lost it.

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let's go play on a baggage carousel
~Natasek:iconNatasek: Mar 15, 2008, 12:58:27 PM
I like the ending verse.. compare...

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Feel.
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~I-is-I-be:iconI-is-I-be: Mar 22, 2008, 12:18:44 AM
your analigies and similies are amazing!

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"victim, your cries reached the heavens,
but the angels didn't care" -Jackie Vargas