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a piercing belladonna much fairer than I;
the darkness of light so blatantly displayed
let us not speak caustically of rough edges---
slicing into the white that is unwarily fading grey
but only honor the truth of sciagraphy
          which speak an abditive fear to bleed or breathe

the silent voices of a violin or quite a few
clashed together in careless lines and eyelashes
solo...
expressing a catly need to penetrate
a great boundary set by demons before us,
demons who are us

it makes one wonder, wander, linger-
for whither in an unfinished portrait
I never thought I'd find the right place
to take your hand...
I have no idea whether this stands alone, but for now you'll have to deal =)
this is the result of a 'writing-test' from my dear adopter *fluffythemonkey, who asked me to write a poem based on a piece of art. The artwork unfortunately is still next to my hand as I type (lol) but I'll scan it onto my Aviusaura account sooner or later. For now try to make sense of this ;P

and excuse the cheesy preview-- it's only a rose brush from ps7 ^^

:dygel: :ost2life: :blackice: :nieman: :liquify: -- my new obsessions....
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I won't critique this until I see the picture. Seems kind of pointless to do it without, yeah? ^_^